При такава концепция за литературата и в частност за грешките при поезията главният редактор Judith Lawrence на „River Poets Journal“http://www.riverpoetsjournal.com/SubmissionGuidelines.html приема стихотоворението ми „Изход/Exodus“, където всички изисквания са нарушени / три пъти И/. И Изводи?
„SQF: What common mistakes do you encounter that turn you off to a submission?
JL: Self-indulgent poetry, normally beginning each sentence with I. Poems/Prose about nothing. Shock poems/prose with un-necessary profanity. A lack of rhythm, lack of lyricism, metaphor, in poetry/prose. Gimmicky poems/prose. Over-sentimental poems/prose best meant for family/loved ones/greeting cards. Quirky formatting impossible to use in a journal with space constrictions. Not proofing sufficiently, although if the poem/prose is brilliant, I’m happy to suggest minor edits.“
And if ever you don’t see
dig in the soil like a fruit
and lift the stone of yourself
to find a word
harder than Maya.
And if you ever demand for more,
dig the sky.